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The wedding party has just released "dozens of white balloons" in memory of the bride's father. This is an environmental disaster waiting to happen. The deflated balloons get eaten by fish and sea birds. This book is so full of white privilege it's not even funny.

Ryder is calling Mac as "...the sun was starting to set in the late afternoon sky." Without knowing the time of year, let's assume 4 or 5pm. Mac is in England and is therefore seven hours ahead. Mac says he's "done for the day" (referring to work) but in actual fact it would be 11 or midnight there. I really HATE when an author is too lazy to convert time and the whole world seems to run on the same clock.

Casey was looking after her friend Julie's baby daughter when Ryder shows up at her office. He thinks the baby is hers, and she realises this and uses it as a way to keep distance. Then they're touring the venues. What happened to the baby? Wouldn't he have figured it out when Julie came back to get her? Sloppy.