Status Updates From Surrender (Devine #1)

I'm enjoying this, but how bloody corny are some of his lines:


“Are you showing off?” The smirk that curved his lips made my stomach clench. “Sweetheart, I don’t need gimmicks to impress you. I can do that with sex.”

Pa ha ha, he'd better deliver!!

I'm enjoying this, but how bloody corny are some of his lines:


“Are you showing off?” The smirk that curved his lips made my stomach clench. “Sweetheart, I don’t need gimmicks to impress you. I can do that with sex.”

Pa ha ha, he'd better deliver!!

Aren't dogs naturally submissive? (She smiled reassuringly. “And if Bernie over there,” she pointed to the dog with a mock scowl and a thumb, making the huge lump of fur whine louder, “bothers you, just tell him firmly, ‘Submit.’”)

Finally! A sexy, dark, asshole! LOL. I need this!

Good so far.......

Have read 10 chapters, I'm well and truly hooked

I'm having a hard time reading this one

❤️

I absolutely LOVE Jake so far. I'm not a big fan of Isla. Sometimes I like her. At other times I just shake my head at her stupidness.

I'm a little confused by a certain character who vomits every time something upsets them, but feel good and happy when beating the brains out of someone. I'm just saying. Maybe it's a nervous reaction or maybe it's a contradiction of character. I must be missing something.

I absolutely LOVE Jake so far. I'm not a big fan of Isla. Sometimes I like her. At other times I just shake my head at her stupidness.

I'm a little confused by a certain character who vomits every time something upsets them, but feel good and happy when beating the brains out of someone. I'm just saying. Maybe it's a nervous reaction or maybe it's a contradiction of character. I must be missing something.

enjoying this so far

Jake Divine is one hot mysterious male. H.O.T "I am going to fuck you, Isla. And furthermore, when I do, you’ll be begging me to. You’ll offer your soul to me so long as I fuck you."