Status Updates From The Mark

“And now your dad wants to kill me personally because…?”
Kade didn’t move.
“You share a name. With someone who caused him significant harm”.
I stared at him.
“That feels like a wildly unreasonable reason to murder someone”
”Yes.”
“Well, good,” I said.
“At least we agree on something…”

a lot of things repeat themselves. which could just be a mistake on the author/editors part.

i’m not really enjoying the dialogue as much. it kinda feels like it’s all over the place. but at the same time, freya is a mood.

“This feels illegal” - sure does, Freya!

so far the mfc is pretty cool. she’s not your typical screamer because someone died in front of me type. she seems interesting. and don’t get me started on kade and nico’s first impression. hot.