Status Updates From Secret Hunger (The Harper S...

At this point in the story, we know all the characters, including the stalker, so there's no mystery and most of the investigation is taking place off page.
However, there is some suspense that is building in the plot, but the romance is a little lackluster. In my opinion, this story is over-written, with too much description of minor event, characters, and settings.

I'm intrigued so far. Minor issues with over description of characters and setting, as well as a couple of grammatical errors, but the story is definitely holding my interest.