Status Updates From The River She Became (River...

we're getting somewhere!!!

finally some character connection 😭 the romance is getting good too

we just went over her hair length and cut twice in the same five minutes. no one caught that repetition???

this is interesting so far but i'm running into the same issue i had with emily varga's last where the characters over explain everything again and again and seem to have no emotional depth despite their backstories 🥲 plz some development before the end i beg

I really wish there had been a little more world building. It took me way too long to figure out the two main characters were not fighting the same war.

So far it’s somewhat average but fun. However, the editing and proofreading seems to have been lacking. Reading this feels like a chore