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Matt
is 75% done
There's a whole lot of totally unnecessary dialog. Just slows things down. rotating through super short scenes helps for the fast paced parts but doing the whole thing like that just doesn't work
— Jul 05, 2022 01:45PM
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Matt
is 54% done
Here's an idea..instead of saying ""Yeah, that's true,' Masters agreed" why don't you just say..."Masters agreed"
— Jul 05, 2022 11:49AM
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