Status Updates From Mockingbird (A Stepbrother ...

Where was Bob Anderson the whole rest of the time? Lol. I can't handle this. XD

"En garde, motherfucker!" // Oh my gosh!!! I can't!!!!

The wedding was at 12 & now suddenly it was at 11. This is sloppy writing. Period.

I'm dying laughing. This isn't supposed to be funny.

I'm confused. She DID answer her phone.

So now you say she can handle her liquor, but on the way to the party you said she couldn't. Seems legit.

That was fast. They've known each other for two days, have met four times total in those two days, she decided not to wear a bra or underwear when she came to sit next to him, he fingerbanged her, & now he's in live with her... Super realistic. Totally. Yeah.

Her uncle is the one who told Diana that Charity was at Lucas' party in the first place. Why is he suddenly so angry & shocked that she went?

So Apollo is Lucas now. Cool.

"Damn," Apollo blurts out, "This is better than I expected." "It's Antonio's. Local place. They know me." // ...okay?

This whole sequence seems unnecessary. Why couldn't Charity be entrusted with her own safety to being with? Does she not know her own limits? Why is Lucas being characterized as a mean jock without any deeper characteristics or believable behaviors? Why is Diana so dumb?

A little info dumpy.

"When it's over we're leaving. Don't let yourself get too attached. I know how you are."

Wtf? Why did. Need a very graphic sex scene with a woman 16 years his senior? I hate OW scenes, and it was very detailed! Ugh

"Party's over", I grunt. "Everybody get the fuck out. We need to have a family meeting."

Lmaoooo.

Couldn't even get thru chapter 2, boring, UGH!!