Status Updates From Goalie Interference (The Pe...

Hot hot HOT.

The characters have me hooked, when the rest of the book wants me to DNF. The writer doesn’t know how to write real gay people

There were homophobic stereotypes in a spicy scene. Conflating Top/Bottom with Dom/Sub using switch to mean verse. And because the vers is now with a top he’s now a total bottom? NO!

There’s only an hour left so I will finish reading this book but I’m so frustrated & annoyed by it.

This book gives me whiplash at times - I love the characters, then suddenly one of them will say something that shows that the author doesn’t know the gay experience well at all. “No one actually thinks it tastes good” for example.

The story is great but the formatting of this ebook on KU is awful!

There are times where a new paragraph is started during dialogue, the grammar tells the reader that it’s a new character talking when it isn’t

Then I loved that the author’s anti AI message included her love of em dashes, but then in the writing she’s using en dashes when they should be en dashes

It does make it hard to read as a dyslexic!

"It was a relief boner, not a sexual thing—" CACKLING AHAHAHAHA

Love when MCs communicate with each other instead of guessing or making assumptions about each other.