Status Updates From Claimed by the Order (S-God...

Reads like a bad fanfiction so far, except I paid $2 for it

So far this novel seems pretty rough.

"Marduk pulled off Emesh's tunic and ripped his skirt down over his hips before expelling his own clothing."

At this point, I am shocked by the high ratings. The writing is elementary and has no flow. I'm hoping the story picks up and takes off soon.

(Oh please, Shamash is the one who ordered the hunt and offered you up, why would he help you? Urgh.)

When Seth tried to fuck him in class that day, he had fought with all his might, but when Shamash laid claim to him, Marduk had simply folded. All Shamash did was undress him, kiss him, ad ask him to submit. How could he let a god take him with words and seduction alone?

His stomach clenched. How many deities would witness his disgrace, and what did Shamash mean to do to him?
Marduk tried to understand how all this had happened. How did he come to be strung up like this and completely in their power? Had he actually let these gods take him down without a fight?

"Have you ever been fucked by a god?" he asked. Marduck's heart leapt, and he stepped back, breaking free from Shamash.
"No!" he said, his face burning.

"Really, Marduk, you should pay more attention to what goes on around you. Every idiot deity in this world knows that Aya belongs to Seth. When Seth hears about your little stunt - that you practically fucked his sweetheart in front of our class, he's going to rearrange your face and rip you a new hole."

If Aya was his mystery god, why wouldn't he just say so? Marduk's desire to take him had been far stronger than anything he had ever felt with a goddess. If it was Aya in his arms last night, and Marduk was sure now it was, what was the point in holding back? Was Aya ashamed of what they'd done?

That night he lay wondering who the god could have been. It would be silly to fall for this mystery god after a blind sexual encounter, but there was something very alluring about him. Though Shala and Nanya were sworn to secrecy, he couldn't rest until he knew who it was.

Rubbing his forehead, Marduk glanced over at Aya once more, and this time their eyes met. Marduk's breath caught in his chest. Had Aya been watching him?

"Seriously, Marduk, you have nothing to worry about. If he has a taste for gods, he's definitely going to be into you. If nothing else, you should just go talk to him and let him know you exist."