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Tori
is 4% done
Solid first chapter.
Second chapter is… tiresome. The author’s style changes somewhat when faced with a lengthier chapter, time jump and character changes. There’s infinitely more “tell than show” going on, which can make prose cumbersome and prevents you from becoming fully immersed.
— Jul 23, 2026 09:17PM
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Second chapter is… tiresome. The author’s style changes somewhat when faced with a lengthier chapter, time jump and character changes. There’s infinitely more “tell than show” going on, which can make prose cumbersome and prevents you from becoming fully immersed.
KC
is 27% done
Christopher is a SCUMBAG. Needless to say, I’m enthralled.
— Jul 12, 2026 08:49PM
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