Status Updates from All Editions of A New Dream (Dreams #1)

CdnBookLover is 80% done

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Debbora is starting

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Charlotte is on page 97 of 167

— Apr 24, 2016 01:53PM Add a comment

Lily is 45% done

DNF at 45% Too boring, weird word choices & stilted sentences. Bo's accent is ridiculous & insulting

— Nov 06, 2015 11:43AM Add a comment

K. is 13% done

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Angi is 82% done

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Angi is 56% done

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Angi is 37% done

— Sep 20, 2015 06:51PM Add a comment

Logan Meredith is 35% done

DNF this one. I agree with the other reviewers in that the concept was good and original, but the character development and poor writing made this a miss for me. I also did not get off on the best foot with the main character who left his two (barely) adult children in another country for a new start after his wife dies.

— Sep 13, 2015 01:48PM Add a comment

Yasmin M is 34% done

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Yasmin M is 17% done

— Aug 11, 2015 09:31PM Add a comment

Jennifer is 27% done

— Aug 10, 2015 06:38PM Add a comment

Randy is 43% done

— Aug 09, 2015 11:40AM Add a comment

Lila Hunter is 48% done

A feather's POV, that's a first for me. It provided the reader with an eagle view of the couple, not sure yet if necessary.

— Aug 05, 2015 02:28PM Add a comment

Lila Hunter is 32% done

Having as much trouble as David understanding Bo.

— Aug 05, 2015 11:50AM Add a comment

Cie is 72% done

— Jul 29, 2015 02:16PM Add a comment

Cie is 65% done

Part of the way through and I'm exceptionally disappointed in the editing.

— Jul 28, 2015 05:41PM Add a comment

Cie is 65% done

— Jul 28, 2015 05:30PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 29% done

"He closed the door to his consciousness..." Is this doable? More importantly, can it be done while reading? Because it could seriously come in handy.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:39PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 28% done

"He loved people, even if the only person he had talked to lately was his dead wife."..... Ummm...

— Jul 25, 2015 10:36PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 25% done

He's known this guy less than a day, and he thinks it's a grand idea to just walk into his apartment? Nice.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:23PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 24% done

"His hardness hurt so much he decided that he might as well relieve himself again." S-e-x-a-y.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:17PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 23% done

There are superfluous commas everywhere, including two bracketing the word 'but', which drives me frickin' crazy, but the Oxford comma? Nowhere in sight. *pulling out hair*

— Jul 25, 2015 10:11PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 23% done

"David silently went into ecstasy..." That's good. Going into audible ecstasy can be very embarrassing.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:07PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 23% done

"The blades of a ceiling fan stood still, ready to move at the first sign of heat." Guys... I need one of these heat-activated fans. Like, yesterday.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:05PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 22% done

The writing here leaves something to be desired. Not English as a first language, I'm guessing, because this is really stilted.

— Jul 25, 2015 10:00PM Add a comment

Katrina Passick Lumsden is 5% done

"... Who considered him the poor widow who survived the car accident that killed his wife." Men are not widows. They're widowers.

— Jul 25, 2015 09:59PM Add a comment

Angela is 58% done

— Jul 09, 2015 11:34PM Add a comment

Angela is 28% done

— Jul 09, 2015 12:59AM Add a comment

Jen is 40% done

DNF. I had really high hopes for this story but had to put it down. Every once and awhile I would catch glimpses of chemistry between David and James but it never really sparked for me.

— Jul 08, 2015 12:20PM Add a comment

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