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Amanda
is 10% done
I don't think I'll be continuing. The worldbuilding was crammed too much upfront - which I would have gotten over except that the information was later repeated in dialogue or inner thoughts. I'm 10% in, and I feel like I know a lot about the world, but nothing is actually happening.
— Apr 19, 2022 07:18AM
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