Status Updates From Interference (Pilots Hockey...

Hmmm is that a twist

This will be my last. I keep trying but they just aren’t working for me

Loving this book, 3rd in series! Yeah so excited Jason has a story.

Don't be stupid Jason. You know the real score and I'm totally thinking less of you if you don't think she's worth staying in town for.

Good...I keep wondering if Tim is gonna show up and pull some stunt. Otherwise, there isn't much happening. No climax or anything.

So, Jason the H is the brother of Landon (from book 2) and Auden (book 1). I was super confused there for a bit because its been awhile since I read the other books (PS-you don't need to read them but Auden makes an appearance!)

Ugh, this freaking book. The dialogue is stilted, the first person POV is not well done and I find myself annoyed with their inner thoughts that they wouldn't just have except to bring the reader up to speed about something. Very close to flouncing this one.

So much telling and not enough showing so far. I swear the first 3 chapters were the MCs (borderline breaking the 4th wall) bring the reader up to speed on the past 2 Pilot series books. I'm hoping this stops soon and the characters start doing things rather than telling the reader about them.