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Carey
is 15% done
UGH. "To" instead of "too", zero contractions when they "speak", bludgeoning the reader over the head with the fact that they're two closeted cowboys...this one may end up in the dnf stack if it doesn't get its shit straightened out SOON
— Oct 07, 2016 07:26PM
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Carey
is 7% done
Oh god. The horrible (non) editing may just do me in
— Oct 07, 2016 04:10PM
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Elyxyz Elyxyz
is 46% done
"Buon Dio, sono sempre arrapato."
Sì, tesoro, Concordo anche io... 'sto libro sembra un'enorme pwp. Speriamo nella seconda metà, va'.
— May 27, 2016 09:24AM
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Sì, tesoro, Concordo anche io... 'sto libro sembra un'enorme pwp. Speriamo nella seconda metà, va'.
Maranda Prigmore
is 50% done
let's just say "it's getting hot in here."
— Mar 09, 2015 08:57PM
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Maranda Prigmore
is 35% done
Things are getting interesting. :-)
— Mar 08, 2015 08:23PM
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Maranda Prigmore
is 20% done
Levi & Curt...I just love bull riders!
— Mar 08, 2015 04:47AM
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Bitchie
is 40% done
Editing leaves a bit to be desired, as well."The scratchiness with heightened the pleasure of being tied" "With Levi's secured, Curt licked from his lips"....some words missing there, same scene.
— Feb 28, 2015 12:50PM
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Bitchie
is 40% done
Ok, in one chapter, Curt is on Levi about not hiding what he truly is from other people (gay) not being ashamed of his sexuality and what he wants, and the next Curt is thinking about how, if he and Levi were really together, it'd have to be on the downlow, because the guys on the circuit wouldn't be ok with it. WTF?
— Feb 28, 2015 12:48PM
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