Status Updates From Burned by Magic (The Baine ...

The worst thing that you can do to your book and character is lack of consequences for their behaviour… Nothing matters, what’s the point?

This is boring nothing is really happening. She is a shifter and bounty hunter/ bartender. She used magic to kill a rhino shifter that nearly killed her. Using magic and not being a mage is a crime so she was taken prisoner. Now she’s before the chief Mage ( such a boring title) to decide if they kill her or not.

Nothing makes sense and it’s all just plot plot plot.