Status Updates From The Secret of Hunter's Bog

So tell-y and boring and just bad. I'm out.

The one scene has Koichi remind his sister (as you know, bob) that he's an introvert, but the next scene he's instantly friends with a stranger. Huh.

WARNING: Will cause you to spend entirely too much time pinteresting "glamping"

Man this needs a decent editor. "No last names given". Yet he just said that they'd all sign waivers before going out. SMH

What in the hell are "fried crab claws"? You boil crab claws not fry than.

Seriously? A brand new, just built strip mall would not have a "squealing" "screen door". SMH

Ummm.... His ex was "a misogynist bully"??? Ummm.... Because of his treatment of him?! Does the author not realize what misogyny is???

"Alligator tail's damn good meat." At least she got that right.

A screen door on the back of s brand new, strip mall store?! That's odd.

And there's the ignorance again... "I was homeschooled and isolated."... SMH... Stop spreading these ignorant, bigoted false stereotypes! The vast majority of homeschooled kids are NOT isolated, shy or antisocial! Saying that is no different than all gay people are flamboyant thinks or all African Americans are thugs! Stop with the ignorant stereotypes!!

Grammar folks... "There's" is not the correct word when speaking of more than one thing. It should be 'there're". SMH

"He wondered if there was enough dry land in there for a decent campsite." Ummm... Wouldn't a good business man who runs camping expeditions have checked that out before deciding where to open his business?

OMDFG! Here we go again. Another author who erroneously uses homeschooling as a reason why someone grew up "with no friends" and is shy.*sigh* Do your homework folks! Get your heads out of your as*^*s! Most homeschoolers have a better social life than public or private schooled kids!

Stupid move, Will. Effing stupid!! DX