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butwhytho
is 41% done
So many errors, so little characterization. The accomplished, professional 35 yo falls for the teen goth who acts 12. Why? How? Did I miss it? Bc I’m certainly not *feeling* it. Also, every scene in the HS makes me wanna skim/skip. 🤦🏾♀️
— Dec 29, 2021 07:47AM
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butwhytho
is 14% done
I get the feeling I might DNF this. The writing is off putting.
— Dec 28, 2021 12:40PM
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kimberly_rose
is 30% done
Awkward everything. Dad too fast in his desire to do the parent role. Unbelievable.
— Dec 18, 2019 07:59AM
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Jennie
is 10% done
The pacing is kind of slow. Might try reading this one later.
— May 19, 2019 10:40PM
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Nile Princess
is 38% done
Why is this devolving into corny land? The sharp tension of the beginning is lost with this blushing, high school type dialogue between father and son. And, to be honest, Andrew kind of gets on my nerves slightly.
— Feb 11, 2018 06:38AM
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Nile Princess
is 26% done
This gothic look is not the business. Black lipstick now? Ugh.
— Feb 10, 2018 07:40PM
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Nile Princess
is 5% done
Liking the writing style here. Loving the tension. I'm intrigued!
— Feb 10, 2018 04:41PM
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Jan
is 66% done
Kevin turned on a tableside lump, then took his jeans off, kicking them across the room. Te crotch area of Kevin's black bikini briefs was expanded tight, but he wasn't shy about it. Andrew could look all he wanted. And boy, did he ever.
— Oct 08, 2017 10:21AM
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Jan
is 62% done
Dear Lord, what a train wreck.
"Do you think that matters? I don't."
"Yes, it does!" Andrew stood as well, facing his father with determination. "It doesn't matter if I'm seveteen, eighteen, twenty-two, or your age. I would still feel it. I'd still want you.
— Oct 08, 2017 08:58AM
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"Do you think that matters? I don't."
"Yes, it does!" Andrew stood as well, facing his father with determination. "It doesn't matter if I'm seveteen, eighteen, twenty-two, or your age. I would still feel it. I'd still want you.












