Status Updates from All Editions of Dead Camp One (Dead Camp #1)

Beth doesn't write enough reviews is 40% done

Picked this back up yesterday. Started over. Instead of ADHD I’m now thinking Eli is Bipolar with a side of PTSD. So many events hinted at but not explained. Darling Mal, I think I know what Eli is keeping hidden from him and I don’t believe I’ll withstand the heartbreak.

— Dec 28, 2019 04:28AM Add a comment

Beth doesn't write enough reviews is 23% done

Dos Sean Kerr have ADHD? Does Eli have ADHD? Do I have ADHD? I’m so confused!

— Dec 28, 2019 04:23AM Add a comment

Lyn❤Loves❤Listening to Real Voices Only!!!!❤️🎧📚 Addict ON HIATUS is 43% done

I am sooooo confused 🤪 I have little to no idea what this story is about 😵

— Dec 02, 2019 09:48AM Add a comment

Beth doesn't write enough reviews is 23% done

Dos Sean Kerr have ADHD? Does Eli have ADHD? Do I have ADHD? I’m so confused!

— Sep 05, 2019 09:02AM Add a comment

Claire B **paused for now** is 99% done

Authors everywhere know the difference between floor and ground it isn’t effin’ rocket science!
Moving on even though I got my maleficent knickers in a twist a time or ten I still enjoyed this one. I am taking my headdress off though because those horns are a bitch.

— May 13, 2019 10:04AM Add a comment

Claire B **paused for now** is 60% done

One of my biggest pet peeves is not knowing what characters look like in books. I need details so I can picture them in my head. On this occasion it works, Eli has no idea what he looks like (having no reflection) so why should we be privy to those details either.

— May 13, 2019 06:04AM Add a comment

Claire B **paused for now** is 40% done

Some of the idioms are too current and keep pulling me out of the book. One character saying he was “down with the kids” doesn’t fit. The setting is the early 1940’s?

— May 12, 2019 07:07PM Add a comment

Claire B **paused for now** is 20% done

A British character who died circa 1890’s would say “bum” if he was using slang. He wouldn’t be saying “ass” as Eli instructed him to do here. He may however be persuaded to say arse...You know, being British...

Adjusting my maleficent style headpiece as I nit pick

— May 12, 2019 07:03PM Add a comment

Claire B **paused for now** is 3% done

Mal was a ghost, an ectoplasmic fart of the human he once was...

I think Eli and I are going to really get on.

— May 11, 2019 12:28PM Add a comment