Status Updates From Six Wakes

It’s pretty good so far. I feel like it’s missing something, and I’m not sure if it’s the way the author is reading the book, or the story itself. Typically I like when the author reads their books, but not if there are a lot of characters and all of them are read in the exact same way with the same tone and inflection.

Found an editor mistake. Before they leave, Maria puts on a leather jacket to cover her dirty sweatshirt, but it was Saille who was wearing the sweatshirt.