Status Updates From That Summer: Part One (That...

Why is this book not in kindle unlimited and why is it so poorly written? There are so many grammatical error and misspellings that it’s doubtful whether I will finish it. The story has potential but I don’t know if I can get past the tense switching in the middle of a paragraph. If you’re going to charge full price for a book, make sure you’ve paid an editor.

There are a lot of grammar mistakes in it little ones but still enough that make it noticeable. I don't feel the chemistry between the 2 main characters and she's supposedly head over heels for the guy and the guy is clearly a controlling son of a bitch and it's also clear that he'll end up abusing her it's so clear yet she STILL ends up having a relationship with the guy?

There are a lot of grammar mistakes in it little ones but still enough that make it noticeable. I don't feel the chemistry between the 2 main characters and she's supposedly head over heels for the guy and the guy is clearly a controlling son of a bitch and it's also clear that he'll end up abusing her it's so clear yet she STILL ends up having a relationship with the guy?

Ugh Insta obsession..... Booooo