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Dahrose
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Again with the word choice that makes me wince - clever minded? Not smart. Not intelligent. She is clever minded. WTF????
Oh - and if you are going to feature a mouthy, sarcastic heroine - then you have to make everything out of her mouth both amusing and witty - so far not so much
— Mar 12, 2018 12:59PM
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Oh - and if you are going to feature a mouthy, sarcastic heroine - then you have to make everything out of her mouth both amusing and witty - so far not so much
Dahrose
is on page 10 of 266
Again with the word choice that makes me wince - clever minded? Not smart. Not intelligent. She is clever minded. WTF????
— Mar 12, 2018 12:56PM
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Wyrdness
is 52% done
The dialogue is by turns completely wooden, exceptionally hammy and utterly cheesy. It's practically it's own flavour of crisps/ chips. I guess this sex scene is about to make it the "deep ridge cut" version of wood-smoked ham and cheese flavour...
— Mar 21, 2016 06:48PM
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Wyrdness
is 17% done
Synopsis for this sounded fun, but currently I'm not feeling it. The few reviews and ratings it has so far seem to be favourable, but it's seriously irritating the hell out of me in numerous trivial but persistent ways.
— Mar 15, 2016 07:26PM
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