Status Updates From The Carpenter's Apprentice

Not impressedso far. 29 is not old. Lots of weird millennial bashing. I'm getting a lot of "not like other gays" from one of the mcs. And the rural/urban commentary is cringey at best.

This is kinda bad….

I mean overall it is okeyish or it was maybe??😅🤔… but I’m not a fan of the writing.. ( too many manhoods here). So yeah not a fan but since it’s not a long read I thought I should power through but it went from kind of okey to very confusing and bad….

Sheesh! There's A LOT of inner monologue going on here. Pages and pages from each of the main characters. They've barely spoken to each other. This might be a DNF. I'll keep reading.

Ain't nothing like a slow build up to get the juices flowin.. Yes, that is exactly what I mean!

So far the dialogue is killing me. I keep thinking, "there is no way a 22/29-year-old man would say that. It's driving me nuts!