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Chris
is 32% done
The minor editing issues in this are a little annoying. I'm trying to ignore it but when I see aloud used in place of allowed, ugh... Unfortunately, I've seen many errors like this so far. If I was paying someone to edit my work, I would be pretty pissed.
I'm not letting it ruin my enjoyment of the story though, because I really love this series. I especially love Dilan and Anna so far.
— Feb 22, 2017 10:06AM
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I'm not letting it ruin my enjoyment of the story though, because I really love this series. I especially love Dilan and Anna so far.
Expresso
is 25% done
******AUDIO BOOK*****
Omg!!! Anna is the most gullible twit ever! She is the complete opposite of all the other ladies in the series! Gaahhhh if I didn't want to know about Dilan I would stop. She is working my nerves!
— Oct 17, 2016 09:51AM
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Omg!!! Anna is the most gullible twit ever! She is the complete opposite of all the other ladies in the series! Gaahhhh if I didn't want to know about Dilan I would stop. She is working my nerves!
Marie Vasquez
is 86% done
I'm all for metaphors, but there is such a thing as overuse. Good writing shouldn't rely on them so heavily to convey the character's feelings and actions. *insert eye rolling*
It's quite excessive in this book.
— Oct 01, 2016 07:29PM
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It's quite excessive in this book.













