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Mike Oaks
Mike Oaks is 43% done
I’m losing interest in this story. Something non-sex related better happen soon.
Feb 26, 2019 11:02PM Add a comment
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Mike Oaks
Mike Oaks is 22% done
Not sure where this story is going... boy, ex, boss.
Feb 25, 2019 05:24PM Add a comment
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kimberly_rose
kimberly_rose is 30% done
Compelling story ideas but needs work: awkward summary style writing, large leaps of judgement, over-simplification. Dialogue kinda odd too—too phoney or forced, as if the characters are actors.
Dec 12, 2018 12:58PM Add a comment
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Pati
Pati is 5% done
You don't get an inheritance that quickly! SMH...
Aug 11, 2018 05:45PM Add a comment
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Pati
Pati is 5% done
How would a young couple in their twenties afford a grand old home? Also, wrong word! The word should be expected Not "suspected"... SMH
Aug 11, 2018 05:32PM Add a comment
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Pati
Pati is 3% done
Seriously? A wealthy doctor wouldn't have insurance? Homeowners insurance? Life insurance? Sorry, I don't believe that.
Aug 11, 2018 05:23PM Add a comment
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Bookreader87(Amanda)
Bookreader87(Amanda) is 67% done
I am not really feeling the connection between the 2 MCs. I can never get why in books when 1 MC is an ass the other one still fonds over him. Like why? What drew you to the dude besides his looks and his "magic dick"?When every interaction consist of being jerked around it's hard to buy any kind of connection. You can't just have an MC say there is one especially since I'm here reading it and haven't seen any...
Aug 04, 2017 10:49PM Add a comment
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Chris
Chris is 30% done
This story has a beautiful flow to it
Aug 20, 2016 04:14AM Add a comment
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Erica
Erica is finished
"my beacon of light in a vast sea of obscurity." I love this.
Jul 08, 2016 11:29AM Add a comment
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Mercedes
Mercedes is 4% done
A doctor without life insurance or savings? How dumb do you have to be?
Apr 10, 2016 06:52PM Add a comment
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