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Steven Allen
Steven Allen is 67% done
You would think that with Ashlyn being pregnant, and using all of these mind powers, that she would be very, very hungry. Our minds are one of the greediest organs in our bodies, and for someone to summon such power, change her shape, etc. would demand a massive intake of calories to support. Nothing like conservation of energy to poke holes in a fiction story.
Oct 20, 2016 10:54PM Add a comment
2288 A.D. - Alternate Dimensions (The Ashlyn Chronicles, #2)

Steven Allen
Steven Allen is 47% done
A mindless, no-brainer, but still some fun escapist literature. Needs a better editor, as I have already found two glaring errors. Assignation instead of assassination. Must be using either auto correct (which will occasionally screw you) or just used the wrong word in the sentence.
Oct 13, 2016 10:16PM Add a comment
2288 A.D. - Alternate Dimensions (The Ashlyn Chronicles, #2)

lee schadeberg
lee schadeberg is finished
good story line
Oct 06, 2016 02:34PM Add a comment
2288 A.D. - Alternate Dimensions (The Ashlyn Chronicles, #2)