Status Updates From The Literary Six

"They sat with their arms wrapped around each other in a fraternal gesture of unity…Theirs was a private sorority…"
I mean, it's two women, do they have to have a fraternity and a sorority. Can't they just have sorority.

I'm kind of impressed at how many times "loose/loosing" is used instead of "lose/losing" in this printed book.

"The fluorescent bulbs overhead flickered momentarily before bathing the interior of the boathouse in incandescent white light."
Make up your mind, was it fluorescent or incandescent?

A little late, but I think it's the guy from the photo.