Status Updates From Head Over Paws

Oh, no, no, no, no, no! It's not good to "just get something that looks cool"!! Those are the ones that people later regret and want covered up.

Oh.... If only a decent editor had helped the author or even decent, honest beta readers. So many contradictions and errors. SMH...

Hmmm... So disjointed... Show us some action then not follow through... And now contradictions. Saying exactly the opposite of what we were told in the beginning... Sigh

WTF?! He printed out the BILL not the "receipt"! SMH!

Being in a vets POV, I expect to here specifics not just generalized "pain medication". And I've never heard a doctor, vet or human doctor, not tell a patient exactly what medication they are prescribing. *sigh* A little bit of research helps a story a lot.

WTH?! I have never met one single person who was "...shy about sharing his tattoos"... SMH.

I'm not liking the tone of this one. It's GFY but it feels unnatural and I'm having a hard time liking Harry at this point. He's pushy? It doesn't help that Ollie is so neutral, almost flat. Harry's attitude has my "bi erasure" senses pinging. I might start skimming soon.