Status Updates From Bella Germania

It's gotten better in Part 3. Maintain it took waaaay too long to get to the story and that certain characters are seriously underdeveloped, but it's gotten better.

How could he be so cold to her? She stole his son! No explanation. Not to him or the reader. I'm 100% on his team. She should feel worthless.

It's also taking everything I have not to chuck this at the wall.

I don't hate this, but I am convinced it didn't need to be as long as it is.

Something to keep me company while I work...