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Shawnee McPhail
Shawnee McPhail is 25% done
So far it's not great. Writing is more tell than show and there is little to no character development. Sounds like an asshole dude trying to prove hos ex was worse than he was. If the writer had taken some of these few paragraph instances and developed them, perhaps we could connect with the character and feel something. I will give it a bit more just to see of it changes.
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Eual
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