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Chapter 24: Fallon was such a milksop. Just one threat of a scandal and he retreated into his shell and cries off the wedding like a woman! Come on! If he was confident that he was the legitimate heir to the dukedom, he should face the controversy with confidence, not tucking his tail between his hind legs and run away.

Chapter 21: And weak, too. She was so upset that it needed her mother do the confrontations. She should be the one to confront first because she was the bethroted. She was so weak that she had take a cue from her mother and act equally as confident that all would be well.

Chapter 18: Heather was really muddle-brained. Many minutes earlier, she didn't have any problems getting intimate with Fallon in his study, but was uncertain when they were in his bedchamber?? Because she was entering an unknown territory?? Duh?? They already did that even before Fallon was hiding his identity.

Chapter 16: Heather was so easy. One melancholic story and one gift and she already melted.

Chapter 14: How can Fallon still hated the late duke's study when he had never set foot into the late duke's townhouse?

And here I thought he knew the ins and outs of the gossiping but he couldn't understand the way the Everlys describe what kind of a gossip monger Lady Goodwich was.

And for someone who lived in Scotland his whole life and never set foot into England and the English society, Fallon sure knew how the ton rumor mill works.

Chapter 13: Lady Everly was a hypocrite. She said to Heather, "I want what is best for you, Heather, and I want what is best for our family." Yeah right! She only wants what is best for their family. How can she want what is best for Heather when she was the one who suggested that Heather marry the old duke? If she really wants what is best for their family, then maybe she should whore out herself; not her daughter.

Chapter 11: I wonder what is so arousing in watching a woman's hands move across the harp strings with such passion.

Chapter 9: Heather said to herself, "What was so wrong with a little wooing? It wasn’t as if she would run away with him or—heaven above—allow herself to be seduced. She would allow only kisses." Was she that idiotic? All seductions start with a simple kiss. With her body's reactions while kissing Fallon, she should already have an idea.

Chapter 8: Heather didn't have any conviction. She told Fallon he won't let him kiss her but succumbed immediately. And why the hell Fallon was acting like a lovesick fool? They didn't have much chemistry except for lust. And a temporary courtship sounds downright stupid.

Chapter 6: It was said that all Heather's hopes were resting on Fallon's shoulders, and what a heavy burden it was. Uhhhh... Nobody asked him to carry that cross. He could simply ignore the letter and her and go on his merry way, you know.

Chapter 4: Heather was such a paranoid and a jumper of conclusions. She gave a meaning on the way Fallon looks at her; she thinks that Fallon was policing her. And does the word "police" already existed in the Regency England? I have to research on this.

Chapter 3: I find the question, "Are you in love? Because the duke wants to know that you are not presently in love with someone, so that he can be assured of your complete affection and devotion." stupid. Did Fallon really think Heather will tell him yes even if it's true? Come on! She needs to marry the duke and desperately so. She won't say nor do anything that'll jeopardize her last chance.

Chapter 2: It was mentioned that Heather would always be a source of comfort for her sister. However, she'd rather not know the awful things Mrs. Brogan said to her sisters. What a contradiction.

Chapter 1: What kind of an older sister Heather was? She'd rather not know the awful things Mrs. Brogan said to her younger sisters? I'm not surprised why people didn't sympathise her. She won't even lend a sympathetic ear to her own sisters.