Status Updates From Quatrefoil

This reads like an overly intellectualized treatise on queer relationships in the context of social obligations (in the 40s). I don’t dislike the characters but the endless unrealistic dialogue is getting a bit old. There really doesn’t feel like there’s much of a spark between the two MCs. I did like the family understanding and acceptance of their relationship, though.

Maybe I just have a filthy mind but I need a bit more horniness between the two. Perhaps it a product of the time, or not wanting to offend, but Phillip is posing nude for Tim, and they’re skinny dipping, and it’s so ridiculously chaste. I don’t require smut, but I need some longing gazes or something like that.

Almost a third of the way through already. Such a soap opera. Our protagonist is a class A prick. I love him! 🤣