Status Updates From Sin and the Preacher's Son

Spicy y saucy 😈

Other than mistaking the word "cautious" for "curious", the narrator is doing a pretty damn awesome job! Too mad the story itself is on the "meh" side. Maybe I'm the problem yet again...

Some times Gary Furlong works as a narrator for me, and some times he ... doesn't. I'm guessing this is not going to be one of the times he works. Especially if he keeps mispronouncing salve.

‘God, how he hated himself for crying and for caring too much. He wore his heart on his sleeve, then wondered why it kept getting plucked off, cast down, and stomped on. What a fool he was.’

Ohhh, poor baby. :(

Steamy, but not so romantic ...yet.

Good promising start.

I'm spotting a pattern...

3.5 (3.0) stars. dragged at points, especially towards the end.

jonah? the horse is the one sqealing. help sultan, you idiot!

waaaaaaaaah!

Starting!