Status Updates From The Path Keeper (The Indigo...

Amazing!

Another minor niggle - zac tosses someone a £2 coin to get a London bus. London buses haven't accepted cash fares since 2014.

Obviously it's been a while since I've been into Central London, but a) paying fifty pounds to get from King's Cross to Highgate is at least double what it should be and b) no-one in London uses fifty pound notes. It'd instantly mark you out as a tourist. Lots of places don't even take them.

I'm not sure about this yet - two typos within a page of each other (illusive instead of elusive, gauged instead of gouged), and the mc is a bit annoying. Let's see where it goes though!