Status Updates From Sweet Company (Crossroads a...

Sorry, folks, but the editing team had too much red velvet cake and got sloppy, there's quite a number of mistakes here. Or was the insta freebie copy an un-edited draft? In which case I'd take my criticism back. In the first chapters the dialogues appear awfully stilted. Honestly, would you complement a friend with "you are gorgeous as always with your long chocolate brown hair".

I'm just starting. The blurb was promising, a decision between inheriting a small bakery and moving into the small town or to sell the shop to a chain store and fulfill your dream with the money instead. Throw an interesting young man with responsibility for his mute little brother into the mix and I am interested.