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Jerry
is 87% done
I am liking this for the most part. Technology and current slang are always an issue in any scifi book or movie. I like the story and the world building, but the 21st century earth lingo doesn't fit with the time of this story in the far future. Interesting to include religion in this. And I know that humans will always have to relearn almost everything but to still find homophobia in the future is depressing.
— Jul 15, 2021 05:21PM
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Stéphanie Amesse
is 64% done
Why are there "klaxons and alarms" on a fully automated alien base patrolled only by drones? "Let's make sure the human invaders know we've got our knickers in a twist." Other than that, still good!
— Dec 07, 2019 07:43AM
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Stéphanie Amesse
is 57% done
This is seriously good. A few strange world-building choices, e.g. continents and planets named after ancient Greek cities when Earth is apparently so far in the past some people aren't sure it ever existed, but nothing too terribly disruptive.
— Dec 06, 2019 07:59PM
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