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Tanya
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Couldn't get through the first chapter. Like the storyline, but there's so much wrong. She really needs to get a quality editor. I could get past the insta-love of ALL the characters and maybe even the sequence of events/ flow issues, but this first chapter was it. At the end of book 2, the king basically knights Miara & crowns Aven king, but no one thought, hey, what happened to Thel after the tower collapses? Ugh.
— May 19, 2019 10:28PM
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