Status Updates From Stone Cold Undercover Agent
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Paula Brandon
is on page 160 of 288
If it's fine for Ranger Cooper and Natalie to shoot The Stallion in order to tie him up and take him away, why couldn't Jaime have done that himself before The Stallion even tried to kill them???
— Aug 30, 2018 02:20PM
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Paula Brandon
is on page 137 of 288
The Stallion's compound doesn't sound as if it has any staff. Why can't Jaime just pop off a shot to his head, or perform an arrest already? Why isn't he recording all of the criminal things The Stallion is saying as evidence against him?
— Aug 30, 2018 02:00PM
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Paula Brandon
is on page 125 of 288
"Gabby had known sex with Jaime would be different for a lot of reasons. First and foremost, she wasn't a young girl sneaking around, finding awkward stolen moments in the back of a car."
Yeah. Now she's an adult, sneaking around, finding awkward stolen moments while held captive by a madman for eight years. Not much better! And grosser!
— Aug 30, 2018 01:49PM
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Yeah. Now she's an adult, sneaking around, finding awkward stolen moments while held captive by a madman for eight years. Not much better! And grosser!
Paula Brandon
is on page 50 of 288
I am REALLY UNCOMFORTABLE with having a heroine who has been the captive of a human trafficker for 8 years having to pretend she's being indecently assaulted by the hero in order to keep up their cover. Yuck, yuck, yuck!
— Aug 29, 2018 05:12AM
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Paula Brandon
is on page 10 of 288
That's right. Let's have our hero say things to the heroine that make her think he's about to rape her! Ick.
— Aug 29, 2018 04:28AM
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