Status Updates From Crushed (Foster Puppies Boo...

There's an inconsistency. A few pages ago, one of the MCs said the puppies were four-weeks old. Now the other is saying they're two-week birthday is the following day. *confused*

// Fuck this shit!! DNF!! I tapped out at 45% but skimmed to 60%, JUST for the sake of getting a bit further. No. JUST NO!! Nothing could save this book for me! Done!!

// "“Perfect,” I said, resisting the urge to slap him on the back. I knew the gesture would lead to massaging his back. “Dipshit, Dorkbrain, Dillhole, Darklord, Dingbat, and Dumbnuts. The cutest puppies who ever lived.”

~ That is the most ridiculous, most hateful, most asinine thing I've ever read. I am raging right now!! Is this supposed to be amusing? Absolutely disgusting!!!!!!!!

// Continued ...

~ WTF?!!? Did you REALLY just say that about a beautiful dog going through birthing complications?!!? Fuck it. I'm done. I went from liking this to hating it!!

// “It’s only for a few weeks,” I said. “The new families will all rename them. Why not have some fun with it?” I drained my glass of water, suddenly parched. “Maybe you’re right,” Harley said. “He is a bit of a dipshit, isn’t he? Too stupid to come out of his mom properly.”

... Continued ...

// ...
You started off so positively!! Why the hell did you have to go and ruin yourself?!!? Nope. Just NO!! I believe I'm done!! I dislike everyone here now except Diamond and her pups :-/!!

// ... attribute it all to an isolated circumstance meant to teach the characters something and rid them of their ignorance. I DO believe it's the book. There's bi-erasure, ignorance, stereotypes, and good old plain old stupidity!! Why, Book, why?!!? ...

// “But that was happening earlier,” he said. “You’re saying that’s a water sac? I didn’t know. I thought things just looked like that down there.”

~ Okay, I can't ignore it any longer. Forget the pass I was considering giving the MCs and one of the secondary characters. I can no longer ...

// No, Book, noooooo!!!

// Book, you were going swell until Harley's sister's blatant idiocy. I'm considering giving you the benefit of the doubt. Please don't disappoint me :-/!!

// “You wouldn’t go for a bisexual guy?” I asked.
“There’s a lot more straight guys than gay ones, so I have more choice than you. I’d let you have the bisexuals out of sisterly generosity.”

~ The stupidity is astronomical with this one!!

// Okay, is Stereotypemytosis a hereditary ailment?!? Because it seems Harley's sister suffers from the same affliction :-/!!

// It's admirable that deceit and dishonesty are traits you're entirely against, but in refusing to recognize your true self, aren't you deceiving and lying to yourself? :-/. Oh, Tynan :-/!!

// Ah, so you recognize and correct yourself. Very cool :-)!!

// Harley, knock it off with the stereotyping, eh? Doesn't matter how gentle you are about it, it's still stereotyping.

// Really enjoying this so far :-)!! Great pacing. Written well :-)!!

// Haha nicely played, Harley. Nicely played!!

// Hahaha the plot thickens (and so will your cock) m'dear ;-) *grinning like a fool*!!

// This seems like a good one so far :-)!!