Status Updates From Fire in His Blood (Firebloo...

Okay I need some action here, she keeps complaining about her sister but has done nothing at all to save her -_-
Also man this dragon is pushy
Would have already knocked his ass out by now

I know he has to bite her for them to communicate but not to even try warning her? Crazy move buddy

Well good to know earth is in full dragon apocalypse so the ladies on the ice planet have it made little do they know

Let’s see what’s happening back on earth!

It was good for the most part, but I found it very repetitive for the "plot" and internal thoughts. Just the same thing/lines over and over again being cut out could have reduced it by 100 pages and made it amazing! Still a good read and worth moving on to book two, eventually, but I'd recommend a revision