Status Updates From Kingsley (Kennedy Ink. #2)

Why am I crying in the club?

Dnf at p50

Why are there so many commas?!?!

Not an hour of editing has been done. Here. Like at all. Feels like I'm reading fan fiction someone randomly wrote on a whim. Like. Didn't the author read what she wrote after she wrote it.?
They're serious mistakes. Everywhere. Damn

The writer has some weird comma placements ...

Okay, this story is incredibly sweet and I love both main characters. But I also understand why so many people complain about the writing. This is really annoying, and English is a foreign language for me, so probably I don't even recognize half of the mistakes. The constant change of times, sometimes twice within one sentence and several other spelling errors really make it difficult to stay in the story...

The blurb sounded great and the beginning is already really promising!

Oh boy. Here come the waterworks. :'(

This Stephen guy is an absolute scumbag! What an asshole!!!!

This synopsis gets a hell yes from me. Hurt/comfort goodness, here I come!

Yes I bought it for the cover.
Apparently the MC does have a 'heard' though!
spelling worse than mine, punctuation a nightmare, tense changes all over the place and first person so I, I, I, bloody I.
Story...had potential.

"I rolled my eyes and affectionately showed him my middle finger."

"I hoped he wasn’t scared. I hoped that whatever was going on right now, he knew that I was here, waiting for him. I hoped that even in sleep, he would be dreaming of the life we were going to have together and fighting like hell to get back to me."

I'm getting so emotional!