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Would recommend leading with Chatine blamed Madeline for a baby (her brothers?) death and not telling a story that makes her look like a brat. Also Marcellus head wound is so exaggerated. The man is acting like his skull was fractured

Pardon! (see I can do it too!) why on earth would Chatine have a deep seated hatred for a little girl (Madeline) whose father gave her a doll in front of Chatine in an Inn?!? Was Chatine staring at this doll in a window day and night for months? In the story we are given the girl appears one day with her dad and is given a gift. Chatine for some reason has a full blown tantrum, are we supposed to feel bad for her?

Plastique, transporteur, capitaine, hon hon hon. Lmao give me a break, insufferable.

You can do a Les mis retelling without cramming in random French words and French spellings of words in a place where french is definitely is not being spoken and is about as far from France, not to mention the planet earth, as you can be. Ham fisted to force understanding instead of telling a story with similar characters and themes. Idk why it’s bothering me so much outside of feeling uncreative and trite.