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This book reads like a fanfiction of Jurassic Park more than it's own story. It really needs to be proof read.
Several scenes/lines are ripped straight from JP. "life, uh, finds a way." the whole "can a t-rex swim" scene in the river.
I was so excited to read this, but I'm struggling.
— Jun 13, 2026 03:54AM
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Several scenes/lines are ripped straight from JP. "life, uh, finds a way." the whole "can a t-rex swim" scene in the river.
I was so excited to read this, but I'm struggling.
