Status Updates From Sword Art Online 6: Phantom...

THIS IS THE TENTH TIME KAWAHARA HAS RESTATED WHAT THE PLOT IS. NEARLY 200 PAGES INTO THE BOOK. AS IF I DONT KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON. I MADE A SOUND LIKE A DYING ANIMAL. HE MIGHT THINK HIS READERS ARE STUPID BUT I KNOW THE TRUTH. ITS HIM. HE IS THE STUPID ONE.

How do you mispell Asuna as "ASUNE." AND no more than ten pages ago "to" was left out of a sentence. "But thanks the presence of heavy clouds, it was much darker than a full moon night in Alfheim." (pg. 184) Is Stephen Paul on drugs?

I REALLY DONT WANT TO DNF BUT KAWAHARA JUST DESCRIBED A HORSE TO ME AS IF I'VE NEVER HEARD OF ONE BEFORE AND I'M LOSING MY MIND A LITTLE

I have been dragging my feet on this because Kawahara keeps explaining and re-explaining things I already know. It's like he's suddenly and completely lost all confidence in himself and his readers' ability to draw their own conclusions and remember details from the very story they're reading. I'm praying this is a phase he'll grow out of because if the rest of SAO is like this IDK if I can continue it's so obnoxious

“Inspiration was the one skill that no player build could boost.”

“True strength was facing forward despite fears, troubles, and suffering. There was only one choice there: to stand or not to stand. To shoot or not to shoot.”