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Emily
is 81% done
I’m noticing some continuity errors. During the course of one fairly short conversation it went from “not noon yet” to “a bright evening.” Also, a detective and a lawyer in two separate scenes said the exact same lines. So, while the story is good (so far,) the editing could be better.
— Jan 04, 2018 09:16PM
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