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Completed Plight of the Perfect Prince by Jason Paul Rice
Could have been better if characters were more developed and the story had a better structure.
***SPOILER ALERT***
I had a huge problem with how a 14-year-old girl became the target of lust for three grown ass men (ages 48, 41, and 29 respectfully). It's even worse that she marries #1, gets pregnant and dumped by #2, and runs away with #3 as his lover.
— Dec 26, 2017 05:18AM
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Could have been better if characters were more developed and the story had a better structure.
***SPOILER ALERT***
I had a huge problem with how a 14-year-old girl became the target of lust for three grown ass men (ages 48, 41, and 29 respectfully). It's even worse that she marries #1, gets pregnant and dumped by #2, and runs away with #3 as his lover.
