Status Updates From Find Her (Avenging Angels M...

It's taking longer to read this than it should.
Disjointed, disconnected dialogue. Large sections that are boring and have nothing to do with connecting to the characters nor their story. Literally had pages about putting away groceries. The BDSM element comes off as reading a textbook without any true feeling, actions nor emotions. Has a 'Talk' not 'Show' feel.

"He wanted them crashed, burned, destroyed for touching his Rose." Em. Excuse me? She has been with him for one! day. He never even thought about her before as anything othere than his BF's sister. Now suddenly she is his? Only because she let him beat her until she cried? Are there a few more chapters in between that I missed?

A spanking... Kinky, sexual spanking... Isn't it supposed to be pleasant?
"By the time they finished, Rose was a sobbing mess and Michael had a raging hard on"
I am sorry, but I am done. That is not a kinky spanking if she needs ice and tissues afterwards, because she is hurt and he is aroused because he hurt her. That is called domestic violance. I am sorry, but I am done with this book...