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Lag: I didn't really like this one. I feel like I don't really know what happened, or if something was supposed to happen. It feels a little unfinished to me.

AR Forum: I liked the build up in this one. It's similar to the first story but a little more suspenseful because there's less repetition.
Meat Cute: The idea in this is well thought out; it's got a kind of messed up quality in the ending that is strange but enjoyable.

Did not expect that.

I like that there's a second person pov story. It's a different style than the others.

Track 001 is the most gory horror of the stories so far. I like the idea of it, but it also feels a bit long? Or maybe it's that the other stories are so short that the longer ones just stand out so much. I enjoyed this one the most out of Marceau's stories so far.

The Clock was a nice short horror. I didn't enjoy it as much as Honey but it got a lot done in a short amount of time.

"Honey": I like this one the best so far! Like the way it unfolds and the references to mythology

Liked the darkness in #NoFilter. I also liked the idea of this story. Thought the pacing was really good.

I get what Ava is feeling, but my sympathy for her is dwindling with every negative thought she has. There's jealousy, and then there's just girl hate.

Well, I can't do anything about the weird update problem, so I guess it'll all be at 0.
#NoFilter is starting out with more fluff i.e. descriptions than the other stories. I like where it's going--popularity on insta etc--and am curious if it will end the way I think it will

Well, I can't do anything about the weird update problem, so I guess it'll all be at 0.
#NoFilter is starting out with more fluff i.e. descriptions than the other stories. I like where it's going--popularity on insta etc--and am curious if it will end the way I think it will

For some reason my page count isn't being updated?

"Troll": I'm not sure how I feel about this one. I feel like maybe too much was happening in a short amount of time. I would have liked to have more details and buildup to the end. I feel like it's more of a beginning of something (or I just wanted it longer?) than a short story.

"Kinda Stuck": I think that text stories are interesting (the writing is good, the suspense is there in the short time it takes to read this, and I have an idea of what the characters are like through the way they text) but I think that it's more effective as a video story. Of course, the story has to be good in the first place to be effective as a video story!