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Iah
Iah is 33% done
The writing feels very chaotic so much jumping from location to location within a few paragraphs then back again. I think yet again a decent editor would have helped.
Why do so many authors no use editors or use very cheap ones?
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Mercurybard
Mercurybard is 48% done
The battleships pushing thru the electrified atmosphere of Juna is a spectacular image.
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Mercurybard
Mercurybard is 18% done
It cracks me up how the Maeyar refer to their spouses. "Dawn of my day", etc.
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