Status Updates From Space Opera (Space Opera, #1)

I'm going to stop reading this. It is not for me. Great concept and I was looking forward to reading it, but it reads like the author had too much sugar and caffeine. It stresses me out. So many deviations and adjectives and punch lines crammed in a page. Nope.

- pacing issues as hell
- every other chapter is an exposition dump
- i too have been guilty of writing obnoxiously long sentences, but that’s why the use of different kinds of punctuation or restructuring is important for the sake of clarity and flow.

MPREG????
VAUGE ALIEN F-KING MPREG????
Please tell me it’s a metaphor and he’s “pregnant” with a song. I mean honestly I’m down either way but it happened out of the blue. I got whiplash.

Did… did he just…. Fuck the bird alien thing….? And get Mpreg’d by it?!? H e l l o ? ??

Wildly creative. The writing is full to bursting of extremely unnecessary adjectives and sidebars that give the whole thing the same too-much-just-for-the-fun-and-showiness-of-it as the glam rock music genre its inspired by. Very fun read! You will definitely need a highlighter to keep track of the important subjects and verbs though, lol.