Status Updates From Her Body and Other Parties

the husband stitch - 3/5
inventory - 4/5

"The Resident" - The twist that this is all an artist's statement is kind of funny? The big reveal of gay torture I didn't find satisfying. Some great moments where the piece leans into the horror of derealization, but it doesn't hang there long. Again some good stuff but long for the material. (The text here suggests possibly the bagginess is intentional, to create disorientation?)

"Eight Bites" - I liked this one - our narrator had a body and a relationship to it, and other people in her life and relationships to them (sort of, the sisters and daughter were highly abstracted). Again kind of under-developed, the story goes mostly where you expect (the final time jump is a nice turn though) after only one move (shed weight takes on its own life).